Using Blogging In The Class

I really liked being able to blog this semester and commenting on others post, because it enabled me to be able to speak my mind on many different topics. I believe some teachers/professors tend to forget that it is very important for students to be able to speak their mind and be able point across well. Along with this is being able to take personal advice from others through their comments and being able to see what another likes and dislikes. The blogging experience over all was made to help us with being able to type our documents an be able to take advice from peer reviews, overall  I believe it did help me.

Peer Review

The peer review process enables me to see different view points other than my own which is really helpful because my peers will let me know what I did wrong and what I can change to help out my grade. I usually take the advice that people give me on my papers cause when they're reading it they have more of an open mind. Whenever I'm leaving advice for someone else I usually read over the paper first to make sure that I can fully grasp the story that way I can make accurate comments. After I do that I'll look for grammatical errors or little small things that they may have missed when typing the paper.

Doc 3

It took a lot of motiation for me to be able to type another essay because it's like I have to type one every week for different classes so when I found out I had to do this one I wasn't very happy. Luckily the paper just had to be on my wiki topic and the one that I chose was based off of something I love which was fashion so it was kind of easy for me once I caught the flow of things. The hardest part about it was being able to find information on Furla because there weren't that many websites giving history on the company and their current status of sales. So for that I kind of had to pull every little bit of information I could find on my topic and use it.

Open Post

Tonight I went to a party in Hawkinsville, and it was probably one of the best parties I've been to since my college career began in August. For the first time in a while I was able to go out with the squad and a dispute not start thankfully. The only thing that was kind of off last night was the DJ cause he played some music that nobody could dance to and slick downed my mood. Luckily for me and the squad by the end of the night he got better and we were turnt.

How I Revise My Documents

My first draft of a document is usually really crappy, because I and just trying to see if I can meet all of the requirements that the professor has asked for just so I can have the paper done. Once I am able to start revising and see where I went wrong is when my paper starts to improve by a lot. I am able to revise my papers by seeing where I went wrong first, and then I'll ask my peers to read it and see what I missed and how I can change my mistakes. I also look at what I can add to my paper to make it better and get a better grade.

Analyzing 2 Colleagues Post

My favorite post to read about this week were the ones that talked about childhood games that different students played when they were little, one post that David made said "the thrill of hide and go seek was increased when played at night in the woods". I have a similar experience, but instead I played ding dong ditch and would run around and knock on people's doors then run away. I can totally see why he had a lot of fun doing it. I also found someone talking about this game and her name is Eriana, she said "  I loved this game because you had to think about where you were going to hide, how you weren't going to get caught , and how you were getting back to base without getting tagged". Which is another reason why love this game.

Child/ Adult Conflict

I believe conflict between a child and their parent arises when he/she becomes a teenager, because the teen starts to believe that they can make more decisions for themselves now that their older and for most parents this is hard. Some parents are not ready to realize that their child is growing up and that they should let them be free, so they tend to keep a hold and may not let them do as much as the teen may believe that they should be able to do. For me this began to happen my 7th grade year because all of my friends were allowed to go to this one skating rink that had a teen club attached and my parents would never let me go so that created a conflict, but as I got older I have started to realize how much I miss being that young again.

Childhood Games

When me and my sister were little we didn't play outside as much, so we would always come up with these little games to play in our rooms when we got bored. One of them was called earthquake and we would sit all of our clothes up on the the bed and the one person would be on the bed and one would be on the floor. The person on the floor had sit in the fetal position and close their eyes, and the other person on the bed would just push the clothes off out of nowhere and it would cover the person on the floor. I honestly have no idea how me and my sister thought this was fun to be honest, we had to be extremely bored to come up with something like that.